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Breathe to know you feel

just narrating as one ember burns
heart content on silent beating
from the chest they yearn 
steady pace to scatter all these thoughts
breathe to know you feel
just narrating as a strangers glance you steal

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  1. Date: 7/13/2009 11:22:00 AM

    Great piece. I noticed you're a new poet, Kristopher. Welcome to the Soup, you're going to have a great time here. Ruben.