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The Challenging Winds

As hurricane Katrina has came and gone, "the challenging winds can do no wrong".
As hurricane Katrina did left many dead and homeless, "the prompt of prayers can
imprint the mind to be-strong!!
Not all it its path did away with the cries, "the challenging winds attacks only in the nite".
O'Challenging wind why do you communicate so ruthless and powerfull. Do you
seek in your path-of-destruction-the need to evacuate. The contact of the history is
the guiding forces that compliment the need for the rain that came. O'Hurricane, O'Hurr-
icane, please come again. :What you did on New Orleans, will never make-us "friends".

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  1. Date: 7/14/2009 3:00:00 PM

    Excellent write Sharderra, Miss Katrina was one killer Cane, i also wrote a poem about Katrina, would love your thoughts on it, a warm welcome to the Soup>>James

  1. Date: 7/14/2009 11:16:00 AM

    Hey Ms Sharderra: first thanks for the great comments on some of my poems it really means a great deal to me when I read of other's like yourself, takes a-liking to my Poetry. And now let me give a "shout-out to your new writting called The Challenging Winds is sounded nice and not to taking everything for granted hope everyone's is better prepare.

  1. Date: 7/4/2009 11:57:00 AM

    Awesome job about the essence of Katrina! I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem. Welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 7/4/2009 6:11:00 AM

    Welcome to PoetrySoup Sharderra. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol