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Butterflies

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Butterflies

     You smile at me and my heart melts, why am I so addicted to you?
Standing there like a deer in the headlights, trying to pick up the pieces of me off the floor.
Close my eyes and take a breath, swallowing back the tears burning behind my eyelids.
O God, does he  hear my heart pounding out of my chest, does he feel my body trembling 
beneath his? Looking into his eyes, such sweet kisses take my breath away.
Falling faster and faster, sinking into your gentle caress.
     Only the butterflies keeping me afloat.

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  1. Date: 7/11/2009 2:56:00 AM
    Like your writings. Sara

  1. Date: 7/9/2009 7:28:00 PM
    thanx for the lovely comments, your poem is so beautiful. Always, Cherica Lynn

  1. Date: 7/5/2009 8:24:00 AM
    We are addicts of bliss. It is natures' device to get us to copulate and populate. You capture it well.

  1. Date: 7/3/2009 1:23:00 PM
    O to be young again, Passion writes poetry, write on! Ashley, thanks so much for your kind comment on my poetry, you make my head swell, with such gracious descriptions. Love jm

  1. Date: 7/2/2009 10:56:00 PM
    You describe the feelings of love very well.

  1. Date: 7/2/2009 4:42:00 PM
    Thank you for your kind words. I like your poems too. Very nice. I will also try to continue to follow your poetry too. Keep up the great work. I have a few more I still need to post. Hopefully I can get them up soon.