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Exhuming The Essence

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Exhuming The Essence

excavate my fervent soul
with your familiar hands
(determination gets you everywhere)
stripped down to just my skin
in this sultry summer night
moon shining provocative…..bright

entwined limbs in midnights swelter
architecture of  this flaming hanker
you must stoke this slow red simmer
I assure you that I blaze
with just the right erotic touch
                        I become a vixen 

trace those fingers down my spine
those lips a naked search
beyond the present sunset
to this hearts clandestine perch
(buried profound but beating)
inside a cave of safety
if you will only reach it
                   patience is a virtue

I am only just a slave
held captive by your binding
to  your Adonis body
I am helpless as a hostage….
my master….I await….trembling
                                   (vulnerable)
for that final surrender

you can render me helpless my love….
and leave me barely breathing…

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  1. Date: 5/28/2011 4:16:00 AM
    Again, you; you, *smiles* This is in mine favz ya know ! Have a blessed weekend (dear poet)<----and I do not use that loosely.... Ok, maybe I do, yet; not in your case ! And by the by... Would you happen to have penned a book by chance, I would purchase it as quick as the postal service allow ! Later dear soul.... much love, james

  1. Date: 12/9/2010 8:19:00 AM
    Hello there dear poet ! I was strolling through some of the writes which I have favorited in the past and stumbled across this one; what a poem ! You have a great talent Christie, and I was very happy to read this write of yours this very sunny day, though; it would have been a delite to read this one at night with some candles burning and a bottle of fine wine ! *smiles* much love, james

  1. Date: 8/2/2009 1:19:00 PM
    Again your work is always a pleasure to read...I love it. Love from CA

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 6:35:00 AM
    goodness! and yes it is! passion is a lovely, profound, human emotion, smartly done here! Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/8/2009 7:27:00 PM
    ~ "Extremely Beautiful Poem of Passion Profoundly Presented" ~ And ~ "Have A Very Lovely & Wonderfully Brightened Evening Dear" ~ "My Love & Warmth To 'You & Your Angel Brianna,' Always & Forever, John!!!" ~ Smile, "Goodnight, Precious & Priceless Christie Moses!!!!":):):) "Bye" ~

  1. Date: 7/8/2009 7:22:00 PM
    ~ For as a fellow poet whom has beheld and known, "Your Rare & Profound Gift of Expression & Verse!!!!":):):) ~ It would only be my own great loss, within the end of all things to do so, I do believe!!!!:):):) ~ Smile, I must run right now; yet I wanted to stop by to sincerely and humbly let "Your Treasures" know; that I have "Never" met "A Poetess As Gifted As Yourself Priceless Christie Moses!!!!":):):) ~ Cont. ~

  1. Date: 7/8/2009 7:09:00 PM
    ~ For an old and "Beautiful" friend of mine; both inside and out!!!?:):):) ~ Smile, I have read this "Brilliantly Beautiful Write" a few times since "Your Preciousness" first posted it a moment ago within life; and it always reminds myself, of how very talented and special and unique "You Truly Are!!!!":):):) ~ "You Are A Treasure Beyond Treasures Within Reality & Truth;" and I shall 'Never' forget this or let "Your Splendors" slip away, as I sadly have allowed to occur as of late ~ Cont. ~

  1. Date: 7/8/2009 6:53:00 PM
    Smile ~ "Hello Beyond Precious & Lovely & Talented Christie Moses & 'Your Little Tinkerbell Brianna!!!!'":):):) ~ I so sincerely and deeply hope that life has been treating "The Both You" so very splendidly and beautifully!!!?:):):) ~ And I have missed "The Two of You" profoundly so it seems as of late....Smile, it seems like eons; although it has probably been but weeks!!? And I am truly sorry for this lacking upon my part; of not taking time ~ Cont. ~

  1. Date: 7/4/2009 1:18:00 PM
    I love the first line so much... it's simply breathtaking and the rest of the poem continues to amaze. "Excavate my fervent soul with you familiar hands." Just... jaw dropping.

  1. Date: 7/4/2009 7:53:00 AM
    Christie,....your poetic painting merits applaud ! CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAP !!!! Bravo my talented poetic friend !!!! james what can I do here,.....ok,...Favs time !!! *smiles*

  1. Date: 7/3/2009 11:16:00 PM
    let me just say any guy who has this kind of effect on his partner is damn good at what he does:) that's part joke, part half truth, part me hiding my own vulnerability behind a wall of wit and sarcasm, as I am prone to do:) you on the other hand are prone to these 'masterpieces of the flesh' that leave me at a loss for words...

  1. Date: 7/2/2009 7:02:00 AM
    beautiful,passonate and with class--charma

  1. Date: 7/2/2009 1:35:00 AM
    Another absolute WOW , from the talented pen of PP ... Write onnnnnnnnn ....

  1. Date: 7/2/2009 12:26:00 AM
    Your title says it all Christie.Thanks for the honour you and Sharon bestowed on my poem.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my posting today

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 8:54:00 PM
    Very passionate it gave me cold chills and took a minute to catch my breath great write!

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 8:49:00 PM
    your writings of love and passion are hotter than ever. keep the work flowing.thanks for sharing your talents!

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 5:26:00 PM
    LOL Laurie you crack me up :))

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 5:10:00 PM
    WoW,I think you'd better lay off the herbs.

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 2:47:00 PM
    WATCH-OUT Christie, the nature of man cometh, as your wonderous visual poem calls!! poet butterfly

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 12:11:00 PM
    can almost feel the trembling at the end! really wonderful! Christie! jim

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