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Tree shadow laughing
Underneath ivory puffs
Intermittently
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 * won 6th honorable mention in Raul Morenos contest *

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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 4/8/2011 5:01:00 AM
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    I have stopped by to read some of your excellent poetry today. I hope to be back soon to read more. I wish you the best with your writing always Sandra. Love, Carol

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    Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
    Date: 8/10/2009 1:28:00 AM
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    Hi Sandra, Congratulations on placing in this contest. I can certainly see why. Your Haiku is wonderful. Lovingly, DAS-J PS sorry to be so late commenting...I've been recovering files... and there's still more to go.
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    Brandee Augustus
    Date: 8/3/2009 1:55:00 PM
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    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Raul's contest!
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    Sue Mason
    Date: 7/27/2009 1:39:00 PM
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    Very cute write here, Sandra! Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest.
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 7/27/2009 12:52:00 PM
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    Sandra, congratulations on your success in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
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    James Marshall Goff
    Date: 7/25/2009 12:57:00 PM
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    love the title! love the haiku! Sandra! congrats!! jimbo
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    Trudy Diane Rider
    Date: 7/25/2009 10:17:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Sandra. ~Trudy~
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    Joyce Johnson
    Date: 7/25/2009 8:30:00 AM
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    Congratulaltions, Very nice indded. Joyce
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    Carrie Richards
    Date: 7/25/2009 6:43:00 AM
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    Congratulations on this wonderful entry, Sandra. Well deserving a win!! :) Carrie
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    Brian Strand
    Date: 7/25/2009 2:49:00 AM
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    Congrats on your success in Raul's contest. SandraRgds Brian
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    Raul Moreno
    Date: 7/25/2009 2:03:00 AM
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    Sandra, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
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    James Fraser
    Date: 7/1/2009 3:37:00 PM
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    Great Haiku Sandra>> Soup Mail>>James

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    Yoni Dvorkis
    Date: 6/30/2009 7:43:00 PM
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    this is really fun. it's such a universal image I can instantly understand what you mean by the shadow laughing even though I venture a tree blowing in the wind has never been described this way. the ivory puffs is cute. makes me think of cream puffs I can pluck out of the sky, they'd be vanilla flavored, naturally:) btw, my poem 'wprds of the master' references the book that my 'wisdom' comes from. none of it is mine, I'm just good at paraphrasing. it's called 'A Course in Miracles'
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    Heidie Buys
    Date: 6/30/2009 4:09:00 PM
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    Brings back many memories of lazy afternoons. So very beautifully painted. Enjoyed this one. Love Heidie
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 6/30/2009 4:12:00 AM
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    Excellent entry to Raul's Contest, Sandra! "Intermittently"...is brilliant! Good luck with this one. Ruben.
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    Sean Kelly
    Date: 6/29/2009 10:27:00 PM
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    Perfect , AA , as ever . So the lost has been found ; no ! it's lost again ; no there it is . Nimbus ! , behave !! ......
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    Hai Au Chu
    Date: 6/29/2009 9:40:00 PM
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    Impeccable syllable count. Thanks for the spot on my "Summer Grind".
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    James Marshall Goff
    Date: 6/29/2009 8:30:00 PM
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    great read on Raul's pic! Sandra!! good work!! and thanks for comments! again, you got me actually laughing out loud! love your "loca" sense of humor!!! you rock! Sandra! Jimbo
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    christopher higgins
    Date: 6/29/2009 7:42:00 PM
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    I love your take on the pic...this is a very good haiku.
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 6/29/2009 7:42:00 PM
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    It's lovely the way the trees play "hide and seek" with the clouds above, isn't it? Delightful, uplifting haiku, Alexandra! Love, Carolyn
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    Kareena Goodwin
    Date: 6/29/2009 7:31:00 PM
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    I like the first line. this is nice work. im new to the soup so if you can check out my work and tell me what you think



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