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REMEMBER

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REMEMBER

remember us.
remember why we burned.
remember why in our heart,
there will always be something to burn.

remember the lips that have known your kisses,
the eyes that have beheld your reflection,
and the arms that held you in the moonlight,
when no one`s around.

remember the evening wind.
remember the damned cold nights.
remember the shade of trees.

remember the ears that tingled
at the sound of your footfall,
remember the nose that reddened
in the smoke of your passion.

remember us.
remember  why we burned.
remember why in our heart,
there will always be something to burn.

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  1. Date: 10/7/2009 11:50:00 AM
    Hi, great poem, I enjoyed reading it. continuted success!!! Donielle S.

  1. Date: 7/8/2009 11:59:00 AM
    hmmm this is really nice. really like the flow. thanx for ur comments ;)

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 4:57:00 PM
    Sounds like real love,,,,,,,,,alway some left, thanks for comment appreciated much, jm

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 2:16:00 PM
    This is a very strong write..love the repeating of remember throughout...wonderful writing.

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 2:07:00 PM
    hhaha! Deborah is so Funny! It's a metaphor! Great write, I like it. Ruben

  1. Date: 7/1/2009 1:56:00 PM
    sigh.........I don't even know if I ever want to burn again. Nice tribute to love! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/28/2009 1:58:00 PM
    THIS IS BEAUTIFUL-PASSIONATE,ELEGANT AND CLASSIC--A GEM-------------CHARMA