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Mom: Can't Take it Anymore

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Mom: Can't Take it Anymore

I love you too much to let you go,
Time to time comes you put that,
Pressure on me that effects my life,
And that leaves me no where in my journey.

You want to control me in every way you want,
Giving me adivises for as much as you want,
Which I wouldn't mind to listen.

Throwing things in my face whenever you want,
It's worthless to even compromise anything with you,
Because you'll always change your words,
Around and take your promises back,
You promised you will stay on your promises,
That fades away in a second from now and then.

You put me down in so many ways in many times,
And I keep on taking the pain,
You discourage me in any way and every way,
What can I say, you are relentless in every way.

You know I love you so much mom,
More than anything in my life,
I know you care about me in evey way,
I don't want a perfect mom,
All I want is for you to understand me,
As I 'm growing up the goals I have,
And the dreams that I want to accomplish in my life.

Sorry mom, I just can't take it anymore,
And stand the things that you say,
Leave me alone for a while,
So I can think things throw my head.


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  1. Date: 6/23/2009 2:18:00 AM

    Wow!Deep.?

  1. Date: 6/23/2009 2:17:00 AM

    deep sigh, thank you for sharing!