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Thoughts of a life to come

Quietness of sea
Nothing but the moon and stars
She sits and ponders


By: Misty Leccese
© June 17, 2009

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  1. Date: 6/10/2010 2:45:00 PM

    another very nice one. As you can see, I really like senryu!

  1. Date: 6/18/2009 11:07:00 PM

    Beautiful thoughts, belong to those who are having them, when love in the heart is ready, beautiful words do flow forth, at first just a few, then like a river of life, which is love in it's beginning of motion. For now though, just being in the heart is prayer, in the solitude of the stillness, of quiet, in the heart of God himself! You certainly are having beautiful thoughts, dear Misty Leccese, love jm

  1. Date: 6/18/2009 10:22:00 PM

    Another succesful piece! This one goes to my favs, Mrs. Leccese!! Wow! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/18/2009 3:25:00 PM

    I do like this image! I feel that I want to know more about what she is thinking....guess I'll have to wait like her.

  1. Date: 6/18/2009 6:58:00 AM

    Welcome to PoetrySoup Misty. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/18/2009 6:19:00 AM

    This one says it All In just 3 lines<3

  1. Date: 6/17/2009 9:56:00 PM

    Misty, you have found the solitude in this fine senryu that creates beautiful art like your poem, jim

  1. Date: 6/17/2009 8:52:00 PM

    Very nice! Keep it up. You're doing great! I can see the image of a lady sitting on a beach at night alone injoying her time. Love Nate