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FU finally

Finally I am fine again
do whatever I can
to forget you, to not miss you
over is the swine flu
that I had inside
or at least it felt like

Finally I am free again
like a metal bird in the sky
did we fly too high?
or maybe too low?
I don't know
but every flight ends on the ground

Finally I am thinking
what if I'm just thinking
that I'm fine and free?
Maybe you are still in me
in my brain and my heart
you DID left me behind scarred

Finally, FU finally
every conclusion is just a statement of the given moment
just words for the year, the hour, the day
the world keeps spinning and the waves are crashing against the bay
but I still hear it like it was yesterday
the good things I realized, the bad things I denied

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  1. Date: 7/29/2009 4:11:00 PM
    Just a warning the soup is deleting anything they find with even hinted at bad language so back this one up!

  1. Date: 6/19/2009 6:34:00 AM
    "every conclusion is just a statement of the given moment/just words for the year, the hour, the day/the world keeps spinning and the waves are crashing against the bay" excellent line! ..line 9 you need "fly" "did we fly too high?" Light & Love