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Ocean's Trance

Crashing with serene,
Against a white sandy beach,
Feet engulfed by waves.

Nathan Bane Leccese
© All Rights Reserved 06/01/09

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  1. Date: 6/10/2009 3:02:00 PM

    i can picture this view---beauty of words--lovely--charma

  1. Date: 6/10/2009 12:28:00 PM

    "Feet engulfed by waves."...Indeed, in trance! Fantastic! One of your best! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/10/2009 11:28:00 AM

    Soothing write, love the serenity and the beauty of your muse...Raul

  1. Date: 6/10/2009 11:19:00 AM

    Absolutely beautiful images and I love the title Nathan :) Love C

  1. Date: 6/10/2009 10:12:00 AM

    Another kool Haiku Nathan>James

  1. Date: 6/10/2009 9:56:00 AM

    Beautiful haiku brother..good work.