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Hidden Depths

You are imbued with a misplaced elegance
Unsuited to a staunch buoyant belief.
Remarkable character strength disguised
And spies hidden like the thief.

A spark of recognition only brief
Glimpse a secret divinity spread thin.
A pilgrimage to discover inside
Start outside then work within.

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  1. Date: 6/9/2009 10:41:00 AM

    thank you for your kind comments and i am thrilled that i'm your first favourite! as for yourself, i really ike the pick of words that you use, they are so unique, putting together a remarcable and original poem that i truly value! i really enjoy reading yours! love and hope to read you some more, Stephanie. ps: feel free to comment on the rest of my poems because i enjoy it! :))

  1. Date: 6/9/2009 8:31:00 AM

    Hidden depths indeed - within the poem and within the writer - and the reader. Well done indeed Paul

  1. Date: 6/2/2009 8:12:00 AM

    excellent