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Window

Crossroads talk like trees
Staring at the street
Backboned sights
Unable to dance around
Yet instead prefer to sink
In the inverted rock pit

Gutless planets building
The most fearful liquid
Nebular night
Flowing cracks
Drowned in beauty and salt
Diamonds with no pride

Pale language
Produces greenish blush
Fingertips crash and grow
Labyrinths of submarine talk
Paper stone steps
Keep flying straight
Fastest way to get lost

Highway notes
Portals keep them cold
Trigger every verse
Beyond and beyond
Until every cloud falls
Snails shall grow and evolve

Oh, sorry about that
Took the sharpened road
Flat spikes release coral spores
Psychedelic magma floods
Should avoid looking up…

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  1. Date: 11/2/2009 9:14:00 AM
    i love this =) great job. i find your longer poems more phsyadelic then the shorter hakus and such. though i guess im not so good at getting the full picture in a short ammount of words. awesome work =) xo Raiin

  1. Date: 7/31/2009 5:34:00 AM
    Absolutely love "paper stone steps" a mind blowing compilation of three innocent words.

  1. Date: 6/6/2009 6:14:00 PM
    Like Ruben said, this is a kaleidoscope! It's full of action and activity all described with amazing talent. This is a very impressive piece and it's breathtaking. Thank you also for commenting. :D Nathaniel

  1. Date: 6/5/2009 10:07:00 AM
    wow, my friend, this is like a kaleidoscope! Every line is a thought or a feeling apart, changing, mutating constantly, giving more than one image-meaning! Brilliant! Keep going...Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/2/2009 1:27:00 PM
    The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative and interesting way. Much for the reader to think about in this well-written poem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comments. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 6/2/2009 11:24:00 AM
    Dear Cesar: Love this one! Quite descriptive, and well written! Thanks for reading my poem. I'm so very glad that you liked it! Love, Janice Herzog xoxo

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 12:53:00 PM
    Beautiful piece cesar! Keep it up bro. - jeremia

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 5:29:00 AM
    Wow. Once again you open our minds with verses rich and full - each one a most unique outlook. You make me think and seriously doors open here within me, within your words. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 12:03:00 AM
    LIke the pace in this one Cesar,especially the 4th stanza .Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome coments

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 2:33:00 PM
    Wow, Cesar, this write takes us to the heavens, beneath the water with "submarine talk" and across a very intriguing highway. Could the coral spores be lava? (I've been warned not to look up.) Quite a journey here! Thanks for the experience. Love, carolyn