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Myselfless

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Myselfless

Of him myself speaks to myself
And burns myself with feeling faith,
Myself he moves to share myself,
He inspires myself and heals me.
Of Him myself speaks to myself
And burns myself with feeling faith,
Myself he moves to share myself,
My pain and benevolence agree.
Who was myself is not myself,
My miserable, dark and wild self,
My wounded, proud and mean self
Is dead as sin should be.
My perched on hope and beauty self,
My dancing sunlit soulself says to me
That to be selfless is also to be free. 

                       Julian LeBaron

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  1. Date: 6/18/2009 4:41:00 PM

    cool alliteration! Julian! and thanks for comments!! jim

  1. Date: 6/11/2009 3:59:00 PM

    "Who was myself is not myself, My miserable, dark and wild self, My wounded, proud and mean self Is dead as sin should be." wonderful powerful lines..perhaps God deserves a capital "Him";) Light, Love & welcome to the soup

  1. Date: 6/8/2009 5:55:00 PM

    Beautiful piece! Amazing freedom true it is! - jeremia

  1. Date: 6/4/2009 2:33:00 PM

    excellent telling..might want to capitalize the He which refers to God? Light, Love & Welcome to the soup.

  1. Date: 6/4/2009 9:01:00 AM

    Hi Julian. Great flow and great depth to the poem. Excellent work ! thanks for the comment

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 11:01:00 AM

    The greatest freedom in the world is being yourself. I love this piece. The concept is superb. Please keep your poetry pen writing you are great.

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 10:26:00 AM

    The greatest freedom in the world is being yourself. I love this piece. The concept is superb. Please keep your poetry pen writing you are great.