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Immortal Adoration

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Immortal Adoration

pure…pristine…unblemished
the strength of this love could make angels cry
bowing low and closing their wings
                                  (in reverence)
 because its too powerful to face 
those mesmerizing eyes of adulation

to capture it and kiss its sensuous lips 
impossible (illusive as it navigates rare skies)
for it is wild and tossed with the hues 
of rainbow streams and flies with the eagles
untamed up where hawks carry dreams

up above us mere humans 
beyond our reach it flourishes….
(coals of fire raging into the night)
riding wind and gathers up rain
and collects sunshine in its perfect skin
soaring free and flowing fiercely 
feral and tempestuous 
it is the definition of eternity

 there could be no comparison
Romeo and Juliet could not compete
and it will go down in history
unrivaled….shouted in the streets
rooftops will hear of this love

pure…pristine…unblemished
the strength of this love could make angels cry
bowing low and closing their wings
                                    (in reverence)
because its too powerful to face 
those mesmerizing eyes of adulation

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  1. Date: 6/9/2009 4:32:00 PM
    Smile~Sounds like the very perfect love~Undifiled and perhaps, even uncontested!!? Again, written and expressed from the soul of a very talented writer~Whoms words resound within many ways and wonders, always!!!:)~"Beautiful Poem Christie"~"My Love Always To 'You & Brianna,' Forever, John!!":) ~

  1. Date: 6/2/2009 5:53:00 PM
    I could not express more beautifully than my predecessors have done so before me. This is a masterpiece-AA Thank you for your comments on my efforts

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 6:08:00 PM
    this stands to reason as why i believe you to be a great and talented poet you are utterly talented and gifted you write poetry i write life this is going in my favorite thanks for the comment

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 5:10:00 PM
    I love the way you open a door to the heart, and allow us to wander among the many rooms of artwork- Your thoughts are as lovely as you are, and I am blessed to have some one of your caliber commenting on my work-I thank you for such, and for all those times when my thoughtlessness cheats me of the opportunity . . .

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 12:03:00 PM
    Great repetition of the first verse at the end. Reminds me of a Mozart sonata, they have the form ABA in musical motifs. As for you content I'll pray every day in the hopes that I'll get a glimpse of those mesmerising eyes in this lifetime. I could use this type of Answer right now. Thanks for sharing -Yoni

  1. Date: 5/30/2009 11:51:00 PM
    Through your eyes everything is plainer ... and the plain is beautiful ... so is your comment on my poem. Love always.

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 8:44:00 AM
    Thank you for your always encouraging comments Christie .Have a good weekend.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 5/29/2009 6:01:00 AM
    FERAL....LOVE IT! This love is indeed overpowering. "This is it, Elizabeth!" You be de one, baaaabeeee. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 11:45:00 AM
    Beautiful. I love your use of repetition... and your imagery is just exquisite: "beyond our reach it flourishes... (coals of fire raging into the night) riding wind and gathers up rain and collects sunshine in its perfect skin soaring free and flowing fiercely." Simply beautiful.

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 1:35:00 AM
    love this opening phrase Christie a poem in itself, a perfect six.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 8:11:00 PM
    Love like this, is a gift of God.....your words so filled with devotion....whoever would receive that kind of love would be truly blessed. Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 3:03:00 PM
    Good loving from a pen with love....let his heart corral this flame and tame it with his kiss.

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 2:20:00 PM
    Beautiful discription of love! You write Free Verse very well. Thanks for the comment, Nate

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 1:27:00 PM
    Intense love, you must really feel like sprouting pink bubbles from your cheeks jojojo nice one C= thanks for sharing!!!

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 11:15:00 AM
    Christie,..this poetry of your soars with great life,..I was flying with you as I read,..wonderful,..you always surprise me with your writes ! james

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 10:01:00 AM
    Now that is a love worth fighting for. love you, K

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 9:14:00 AM
    Well Christie Moses... what can a man say, should he hold this love to him..could he contain this .." up above us mere humans beyond our reach it flourishes…. (coals of fire raging into the night) riding wind and gathers up rain and collects sunshine in its perfect skin soaring free and flowing fiercely feral and tempestuous it is the definition of eternity" .... the images you paint are always astonishing in their beauty; your talent undoubted.

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 8:00:00 AM
    TRUE LOVE STORY BEAUTIFUL AND TOUCHING GREAT WRITE