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The Think Tank

I do some of my best thinking,
when I sit in a certain spot,
I make some profound realizations,
and it happens quite a lot,

This time for example,
As I sat there inert,
I thought then to myself,
Constipation really hurts!

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  1. Date: 6/19/2009 1:24:00 PM

    Yes, what else to do during the situation. especially if you are plugged. Love your sense of humor. I have put my poems in a chap book called, Not So Serious. and it is at the publisher right now waiting, waiting. I won't hold my breath. Love, daver

  1. Date: 6/13/2009 2:53:00 PM

    I've been there, Deneith, and, by the way, like the old lady in the supermarket, I've been there too...I'm 80 years old. Hey! Love your humor. daver

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 12:30:00 PM

    You are rhyming..the form in rhyming..actually 2 groupings of 4 lines each AND very funny! Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/26/2009 3:10:00 PM

    I can relate to this deneith, well written>James