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What is wrong with me?

When I walk by you,
I see stars.
When I hear your name,
My heart pounds.
When I hear your song,
A smile forms on my face.
When you say hi,
I want to fall.
When I'm around you,
I make a fool of myself.
What is wrong with me?
Why do I feel like this?
When you hug me,
I want to die,
right there in your arms.
Whats wrong with me?
Your all i think about.
Am I crazy?
I feel insane.
Stars, Heart pounds,
Smiles for no reason.
Wanting to fall and die in your arms.
Am I a loon?
Whats wrong with me.

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  1. Date: 6/12/2009 8:58:00 PM

    Nothing iw wrong with you. I think that you are in the throes of passion and have expressed it well.

  1. Date: 5/31/2009 6:39:00 AM

    Nothin but true love in this poem, a fine piece of work -Jessica

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 7:03:00 PM

    sounds like love hon. -smiles- good for you

  1. Date: 5/26/2009 7:35:00 AM

    I think nothing is wrong with you. That is a natural feeling of people in love. That happened to me several times...lol. TY for making me smile. This made me happy. Ernilando