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THE HUNTRESS

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THE HUNTRESS

A pursuer at an precocious age,
Instantly able to set the stage.
Unaware of the glare from a piercing stare,
Calculated thoughts and moments planned; the prey would be snared. 

Indulging in oratory flights of beautiful language,
Enticed by a venomous tongue the prey languished.
Striking the first note of genuine eloquence,
The Huntress pillaged without rendering an element of forbearance.

The impending execution of the venom ignited an explosion,
That there was an instant expulsion.
From the impending death,
The prey took a long deep breath.

The craving of the Huntress had grown,
The prey subsided with a shuddering moan.
Towered by the Huntress’s shadowing eclipse,
Impetuous feeling the softness of her kiss.

	


@  Tunisia Torres
2/3/2009

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  1. Date: 9/30/2009 4:21:00 PM
    Just wanted to stop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 3:15:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Tunisia. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/25/2009 11:16:00 AM
    This is when its fun to be the hunted. Congratulations Tunisia on "The Huntress" being featured. Vince

  1. Date: 6/25/2009 11:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/23/2009 2:05:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured. Bravo my friend. Ernilando

  1. Date: 6/22/2009 4:20:00 PM
    The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a powerful way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you ongoing success. Karen

  1. Date: 6/22/2009 7:08:00 AM
    Tunisia - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 5/23/2009 3:27:00 AM
    PS I put this poem in my favorite poems. Excellent work. Smiling, Dane

  1. Date: 5/23/2009 3:25:00 AM
    Wow! This is great. It is also nice to see that you explore several poetry forms. I like to do that, too. This one is powerful and very enjoyable to read. Keep Writing. Love, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 5/22/2009 11:42:00 AM
    Beautiful.