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My Five Angels

Im dancing roon the kitchen, the music is ablast, Ma table is a buzz of life and i am not 
harrassed. You see i have five angels who drive the neighbours wild, but in my eyes there's 
nothing better than the laughter of a child. We laugh and dance together and i thank god im 
alive,Cause sometimes i will doubt that when the sperm donor arrives, But today im very 
happy, I have my angels to myself, the joy i feel's fantastic and may it never end, cause I 
know whatever happens i will be there to defend.

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  1. Date: 8/31/2011 6:08:00 PM

    Ooops! they did tell me the container was going to Scotland hehe! I love this poem there is nothing like the laughter of children. MORE!!!

    Mcnaughton Avatar Kate Mcnaughton Date: 9/5/2011 5:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    HAHA. this is about my beautiful children when they were small and my ex, their father. I have been happily married second time around now for years. I do agree about the laughter of a child, I't makes me happy but also gives me a lump in my throat and a tear. children are precious.
  1. Date: 9/28/2009 3:44:00 PM

    Loving tribute from a mother who adores her children. Love this !! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 5:32:00 PM

    nicely penned, thanks for your comments on my works!

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 7:08:00 AM

    It seems we have much in common. I too have 5 angels. However I was not so blessed as they are no longer with me. Hold them tight and enjoy all you can......The Southern Bell.

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 3:59:00 PM

    I bet they run you wild Kate, nice write>>James

  1. Date: 5/19/2009 7:49:00 PM

    Very sweet. There's nothing like the sound of laughter and the hug a of child. May you always be blessed. Nice poem.

  1. Date: 5/19/2009 4:56:00 PM

    The guardian angel and her cupids all tied in apron strings. That donor better hide his mug before he shows it around you! Wonderful sentiments Kate!-AA

  1. Date: 5/19/2009 2:01:00 PM

    good poem