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Hatred

Her eyes burning with hate
Anger fills her soul
Trying to help her will
Result in nothing but confusion
Everyone take notice in this:
Doomed is the soul satan dwells in

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  1. Date: 5/21/2009 5:25:00 AM

    I agree with Brandy. also, i tend to be filled with much anger, this makes me wonder if in these lines "anger fills her soul....doomed is the soul Satan dwells in" you mean that those filled with anger, are in a way taken by evil? hmm, it just makes me think. nice Job. Jese

  1. Date: 5/20/2009 7:05:00 AM

    Hatred is another powerfull subject in poetry.This poem is a great success in establishing that.Good:)

  1. Date: 5/19/2009 2:48:00 PM

    YES BUT YOU CAN REBUKE HIM YOU ARE YOUR STRONGEST AND WEAKEST POINT