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Soul v/s Love

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Soul v/s Love

Soul in silent abyss

distancing itself from harmonic love

that amid fantasy hard to shove

sights of past-future, happy-sad

and those at times hard to find

crawls and creeps as thoughts unleash

where shadow defeats its own self

enduring the darkness of the cold soul 

  

but languish love manipulate glow 

never estrange to jilted soul 

true to its nature creates a vacuum 

hard to fill even if pyramid built 

reaches the warmth of forbidden soul 

let the inevitable death haul 

once amorous now the barren soul 

“I stay forever”, cried love immortal


 
rAHUL...

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  1. Date: 10/2/2009 12:03:00 PM

    Rahul, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 4:34:00 PM

    Just wanted to add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 10:27:00 AM

    Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 10:39:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/3/2009 12:53:00 PM

    Good use of imagery for an interesting view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen

  1. Date: 8/3/2009 11:58:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being selected to be featured this week Rahul . Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/3/2009 10:27:00 AM

    Congrats on the feature.....:JP]

  1. Date: 8/3/2009 8:41:00 AM

    Rahul this is an excellent poem - love the concept my friend - Congrats on being featured - God Bless, mj

  1. Date: 8/3/2009 4:31:00 AM

    Congratulations on being featured>>James

  1. Date: 5/26/2009 8:18:00 PM

    The concept of confrontation or contrast between ideas ins your poems is nice, it delivers a pair of very opposing or different angles forcing them to coexist in a same space, making such interaction a compliment between ideas, a more complete vision; thanks for the experience, yeah!!!=D

  1. Date: 5/26/2009 6:48:00 AM

    Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/16/2009 10:52:00 PM

    Another creative write, nice - James

  1. Date: 5/16/2009 9:18:00 PM

    You have created such imagery to the heart in this poem. i enjoyed this write. -Alley