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Human Nature

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Human Nature

The Computer Screen Light

Splints off The Fluid in His

Eyes, And Cascades The 

Twinkling Against the Wall.


              -She Curls up in a ball-
        -He Takes up The Fetal position-


The Headset Poses Security

Against the Deafening Sounds

of Reality. The Light Outside,

Fades to A Deep Blue...


               - She Cries To Pass The Time -                  
            - He's Done Crying, No Liquid Left -


He Lies Back on his Chair, in

Sheer Agony. Stems Covered

With Leaves Burst From His

Veins. His legs Root to the carpet.


               - Sleep Grants her little solace -
           - He Hasn't Slept in Over Two Weeks -


Mimicking Womb Protocol, She

Folds. Clutching her Stomach

She Heaves Forward a Lunguful 

Of Bark. Shes Changing


               - She Smiles across the Water -
       - The Water Ripples Following his Response -


Intertwined in Friendship, 

They Grow Towards The Sun...





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  1. Date: 8/7/2009 11:09:00 PM
    =] I love you so much.

  1. Date: 6/5/2009 11:56:00 AM
    This is a commute beyond boundaries only immortals trod. What a terrific and original write. Love

  1. Date: 5/20/2009 8:18:00 AM
    I take it up in commenting your unique style.Keep it simple !LovINg it!

  1. Date: 5/16/2009 4:40:00 PM
    I love this!! YOU MA HERO!!!! My favorite (but of course you knew that) line is "She smiles across the water, The water ripples following his response". Gorgeous, =). I'm glad.

  1. Date: 5/16/2009 1:17:00 PM
    Wow, loved the last two line, great structure...Raul