Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places



Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

DRIFTING PT. 2 BY NIGHT'S END ALL SHALL COME TO PASS (the ending that couldn't fit on same page

Larry McMillan Jr. Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled DRIFTING PT. 2 BY NIGHT'S END ALL SHALL COME TO PASS (the ending that couldn't fit on same page which was written by poet Larry McMillan Jr.. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Larry McMillan Jr.

Best Larry Mcmillan Jr. Poems

+ Fav Poet

DRIFTING PT. 2 BY NIGHT'S END ALL SHALL COME TO PASS (the ending that couldn't fit on same page

I got nothing to lose!
I might as well.  What the hell!
Here I come now I can see.
Plain and vividly.
Right up the path on Willis Ave - Section 2 - Apt 3

I’m Breathing heavily! 
Anxiety has stricken me!
Everything is a blur to me!
I’m inside the building now!
But I don’t remember how!
I swear I don’t remember how!
Knock…Knock…
“Who is it”?
Knock… Knock.. Knock…
“Ok.. Wait a minute”!
Knock!!! Knock!!! Knock!!!  Knock!!!
“Fool you got me twisted.  It’s twelve o’clock at night
My kids are tucked in tight!  This better be important!
Now  who in the hell is this”!

And the door opens……

One scream was heard and it was finished….
By nights end…  All came to pass….


BY NO MEANS AM I PROMOTING VIOLENCE, OR  MALICIOUS BEHAVIOR IN THE 2 STORIES I 
HAVE DISPLAYED (DRIFTING: PTS. 1&2).  HOWEVER, THIS STORY ALIKE THE MAJORITY OF 
THE  REST OF MY POEMS ARE VERY MUCH REAL AND ARE BASED ON A SERIES OF 
DEMORALIZING, HAUNTING AND INEXPLICABLE EVENTS I SUFFERED.  IN ORDER FOR THE 
READER(S) TO GET A BETTER UNDERSTANDING IN WHOLE, YOU MUST READ THE EPILOGUE, 
WHICH I WILL POST ASAP.


Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 5/6/2009 10:43:00 PM
    Intense, sharp imagery and emotion, seems like something out of Jack thr Ripper, look forward to reading the end. Judy riley