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Murmuring Softly

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Murmuring Softly

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                                                          Mysterious song
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                                                Softly sung by mourning doves
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                                                     Soothes my aching soul

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  1. Date: 1/30/2011 12:56:00 AM
    Such a sweet SENRYU, Laurie! Superb 's' alliteration and perfect 575 meter... Great job!!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 8/22/2009 11:45:00 PM
    Nicely written. Much is packed in three lines. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 10:28:00 AM
    This is sweet. I had four kids. My morning song was Let There Be Drums. Just joking. Great write. Have a wonderful day. Vince

  1. Date: 5/14/2009 7:17:00 AM
    ooh this is lovely. -Brooke

  1. Date: 5/13/2009 1:38:00 AM
    Lovely image, Laurie. Imagine a day when even doves are mourning, but their song provides peace for you. Beautiful, gentle poem! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/12/2009 4:38:00 PM
    Very peaceful. Nice.

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 6:49:00 PM
    Dear Sis, Laurie, Excellent Senryu I agree with the soothing songs of the "Mourning doves My Soul aches more than YOURS Thank-YOU for Your Gracious Comments LOVE ALWAYS... HG Soup Mail Call

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 8:42:00 AM
    Feels soothing to me. Nice use of alliteration and imagery. I enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comments on my Brevette. Keep up the good writing! Karen

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 7:54:00 AM
    How can a soul that aches create such a gift of beauty ... it must be the tender nest of the mourning doves. Love it!

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 3:01:00 AM
    Ah, those doves. beautiful, Laurie. cooing their way to heaven. love, Kristin

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 7:52:00 PM
    The doves have moved into our fig tree..I was going to write something about it..but forget it..you have written what i wish i could have...lovely. BG

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 2:47:00 PM
    oh how wonderful!....this is just lovely Laurie......nice work...love n smiles Maryam

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 10:43:00 AM
    Soft & swett together Laurie.Thank you for your welcome comments on my postings .Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 7:53:00 AM
    Laurie, I aplogize profusely for my remark... Please forgive me... K.

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 7:46:00 AM
    I have been advised to remove the words 'you're gonna get it!!!' from my comments. It was meant only in fun... but if we must be PC, (though I think this is stretching it a bit), they are hereby removed... happy now?

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 7:32:00 AM
    A melody I can feel ... a need I share ... a sweet write of a poem.

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 7:23:00 AM
    I think I would stay in bed all day, to listen if I could! This is a beauty, my friend!! They do know how to carry a lovely tune, don't they?? xoxo

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 6:28:00 AM
    Laurie, this is stunning beauty. Every now and then they pay me a visit in my back yard, two at a time. Your poem says it all. Outstanding. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 6:04:00 AM
    mail call!!!

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 6:02:00 AM
    A beautiful SENRYU/HAIKU honey! Marvelous 's' and 'm' alliteration... you got it PERFECT!!!! Hugs, Keith

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