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My LOVER'S EYES (Senryu Series)

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My LOVER'S EYES (Senryu Series)

1   Alluring : mystic                                4   Mesmerizing  eyes  
      Light brown : almost hazel eyes              Caressing my Heart with LOVE               
      Always  full of LOVE                               Knowing they own me

2   Eyes with flecks of green                    5   My Barbara Jean
     Immersing my Heart and Soul                 Your light brown eyes filled with LOVE
      In Eternal LOVE                                     Capture my Heartbeat
        
3   Soporific eyes                                    6   Together our eyes
     Singing  a sweet lullaby                           Entwine the arc of Rainbows
     The song Forever LOVE                           Brown-green and blue gray

       This is for YOU ; Barbara Jean Gorelick ; with all my Heart , with all my LOVE
       Submitted for Pen to Face, Face to Pen Contest  Sponsered by Sami Al-khalili

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  1. Date: 2/15/2012 11:16:00 PM

    Beautiful! Brown hazel eyes are really cool. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 5/14/2009 10:05:00 PM

    Superb write.Thanks for commenting on my poem.

  1. Date: 5/13/2009 1:43:00 AM

    Gazing into Barbara's eyes, you find so much beauty, HG. Lovely dedication to one of our most beloved writers!

  1. Date: 5/12/2009 8:00:00 AM

    A rich weave of imagination, a sweet sculpture of words ... all the best in the contest. Great tribute to your soul.

  1. Date: 5/10/2009 9:07:00 AM

    HG... just carried away on a cloud! sweet!!! Jim

  1. Date: 5/10/2009 12:38:00 AM

    Nice one HG especially no 6.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 11:48:00 PM

    I agree with brother Ruben, one is enough. This is loaded. Anyway, I enjoyed it. This a manifestaion of a true love. Good luck in the contest. I have also one featured poem this week. Ernilando

  1. Date: 5/7/2009 8:54:00 AM

    Such an adoring tribute to your love. Good luck in the contest with this beautiful poem HG! & thank you for your outspoken comments on my poem also. They are always welcomed! Thank you! ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 3:24:00 PM

    this is bombastic-excellent infact its going to my favs--charma

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 6:19:00 AM

    Oh wow, wow, wow!!! Blown away by your beautiful, outstanding, loving, adoring poetry! And dedicated to one of my most favorite poetic friends! I feel BIG WINNER right here! Bravo dearest brother. Good luck! Lots of love, Shar xoxo

  1. Date: 5/5/2009 5:42:00 AM

    This is too much, HGarvey! You can win a contest with each one of this Senryus! Fantastic write, my friend! Great-grreat work! Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 11:50:00 PM

    Beautiful work HG, and best of luck in the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 7:45:00 PM

    You go BG, such a beautiful tribute from a man that knows how to love. Great job HG, I smiled to the end.

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 6:40:00 PM

    HG..Your going to win, hands down..I cant wait to " pay up"..see your mail. BG

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 6:39:00 PM

    Great! Great write! Good luck on the contest! - eduardo