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fire

crackle crackle
the sheets of yellow
red and orange
lick the rocks 
like kittens and milk
sizzle sizzle
filled with danger 
and beauty
mysterious and seductive
almost aluring in a sense
leaping across the burning wood
like ballerinas on a stage
crackle crackle
burn
sizzle sizzle
fire

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  1. Date: 6/18/2009 3:47:00 PM
    Quite an awesome description of what has mesmerized people for centuries. I loved this! Love Christie

  1. Date: 6/18/2009 9:36:00 AM
    I love this piece! Fire does have a seductive flare while at the same time can be harmful to bare. Great expression!