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i am done

i am tired
of writing songs
for you

the peak of the
music
crescendos no 
longer

the songs are more
mellow
like a common
country song

by janetta

(comment; i love country songs, but they are more open and uncomplicated).

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  1. Date: 1/26/2012 12:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. You have good simple wording here that has no trouble in conveying clear images to the reader.

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 9:03:00 AM

    Congratulations on your featured poem this week Janetta. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/28/2009 11:56:00 AM

    wow dude. you just lost your mojo. jhl

  1. Date: 4/28/2009 6:27:00 AM

    OH I know this feeling so well. Perfectly described. Love Christie

  1. Date: 4/27/2009 10:44:00 PM

    Sometimes the passion fades, Janetta, but I like to think it can be rekindled. And there's nothing wrong with country songs. They may not have the intensity of other musical forms, but they provide comfort and memorable stories. Very nice poem! Best Wishes, Carolyn