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Charmaine Chircop Date: 3/8/2010 5:14:00 AM you're definitely not the devil's face,loyalty's mysery,that feeking i can relate to.being wanted yet not needed.feeling dead yet craving feelings,dreams,heartbeats.very deep poem,the title reflecting its intensity.great Sami!Sami,tnks for reading,recontest,im just an amateur who writes for fun,so thats why i dnt submit,yet tnks for believing in my poems,Charma.
Sue Mason Date: 5/25/2009 10:36:00 PM Powerful write here, Sami that certainly reflects the title ... smile ... we've all got a little of the devil and a lot of Mystery in us all ...
valerie bellefleur Date: 5/13/2009 7:42:00 AM Such poinant descrption - I find the Depression such a topic for poetic fodder. Thank you for your comment on my poem. I have also written several on this subject.
derrick burton Date: 5/9/2009 7:33:00 PM I love this poetry.... it has so many great lines and ia read it so many times over and over. Wanted to commented when you were on. Enjoy your weekend.
Debbie Guzzi Date: 5/5/2009 8:09:00 AM some deep thought is still buried here? Light & Love
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 5/5/2009 1:54:00 AM You have made some excellent points in this poem. They are sort out used cliche's but they fit with your write. And they are still meaningful. "…mirrors are an illusion of the truth." Beauty is in the eye of the beholder...others view you as handsome... And, from the last few lines, you can't judge a book by its cover... I hope you don't really feel like the devil's face...or were you writing from the devil's perspective? Interesting! Love, Dane
sharon weimer Date: 5/1/2009 10:16:00 AM Sorry to be late, I have been off the site all week, but think I missed this even before. This is very complex writing, and the last two verses are terribly sad. Many brilliant lines. Your poetry filled with great depth and always worth the read. Hope all is well. Love, Shar
Ernilando Tugaff Date: 4/28/2009 11:28:00 PM Sami my friend. Very nice. Keep on posting. Ernilando
Christie Moses Date: 4/28/2009 9:28:00 AM Well this is simply brilliant. "mirrors are an illusion of the truth much of denial such of what is empty" amazing profound writing. Love Christie
Anthony Nutter Date: 4/27/2009 12:04:00 PM Wow>>>Your talent really shines through congratulations on being featured.
diane christian Date: 4/27/2009 10:50:00 AM a wonderful poem, thanks for your kind comments on my poetry, congrats on bing featured too, God bless from diane
Aleera De La Keur Date: 4/27/2009 3:03:00 AM This is a great poem, mystifying and wonderful, congratulations for a well deserved feature for this week.....Aleera
Ruben O. Date: 4/26/2009 7:45:00 PM Because it's a litle confusing and intriguing...I like it. The title, the persona, the abrupt change in the last two stanzas (which are amazing), the third stanza (also so compeling)...I'm trying...reading one more time...
Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/26/2009 7:17:00 PM You have mail, Sami.
Date: 4/26/2009 1:23:00 PM There is a lot of depth in this poem for the reader to ponder about. Nice use of imagery. Keep up the good writing! Karen
Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/26/2009 1:15:00 PM Very intriguing, Sami. Excellent use of images and a unique style. Well done! Carolyn

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