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Another Detonation

The explosion was loud,
it rattled panes,
created worried crowds,
darkened clouds,
falling rain,
acid, but rain just the same,
pigeons reeling into the sky,
flying high,
by the millions as they try
to escape the aftermath,
another detonation
could destroy the nation,
God’s creation,
salvation.

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  1. Date: 4/22/2009 8:56:00 AM

    A timely one to meet earth day, great crusader of the verse, love and peace

  1. Date: 4/21/2009 10:50:00 PM

    i want this poem,i want your writing but not the the detonation-ow my i definitely need an angel near me then!!!"acid,but rain just the same"-scary, very scary,trying to escape the aftermath then another detonation-no thanks;-),you re a great creator of words,you re so talented Frank in all that you write-cheers charma

  1. Date: 4/21/2009 4:45:00 PM

    How I fear that final "detonation," Frank! Brilliant poetry. I was captivated by the rattling panes, worried crowds, aicid rain and God's creatures awaiting "another detonation." Awesome! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/21/2009 10:31:00 AM

    I love this piece..the title flows right into the work..nice