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Below is the poem entitled Still which was written by poet Oluwaseun Ogunbiyi. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Still

As a swift tempest
making it's way towards us
yet we only wait.

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  1. Date: 7/10/2009 9:07:00 PM
    Wonderful haiku, Oluwaseun! You're very good with this short form! Great job. Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/20/2009 8:30:00 AM
    This is great haiku. so, still means stillness. Thank you for commenting my poem. I'm looking forward to read more of your haiku.

  1. Date: 4/20/2009 6:19:00 AM
    Beautiful. Ryhmes. pls insert the title in one of the lines, i.e. yet we still do wait (5cylb). I wish you all the best.

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 8:08:00 PM
    Nice work on your haiku, perfect description of waiting patiently...Raul