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Vex In Nirvana

Bare feminine feet amongst the blind weeds
On naked skin she paints a pink that bleeds
Journeys the still soar of wind that echoes
Where only his reflection truly knows

Mirrored eyes that gaze deep in scars of rain
She hears his whisper through her weep of pain
“Find me!“ she cries atop the mountain peaks
Petals plead the sky …voiceless yet she speaks

Captures the substance in a strong man’s hand
In him spills her essence….golden grains of sand
Poured hot on him in endless wells of sound
Pier glass….reminiscing lust…true beat found 
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        Raw ripping bliss….this restless breaking heart
               Wretched rapture….can they endure apart?

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  1. Date: 4/22/2009 9:15:00 AM
    What a seductively beautiful write of tenderness and passion ... your words drip like dew from a delcious forest ... what fortune here for the lucky one.

  1. Date: 4/20/2009 1:50:00 AM
    Amazing ending, the question lingers, fantastic job...Raul

  1. Date: 4/18/2009 10:02:00 AM
    Hi Christie... I am speed dialing W.B Yeats but he's not answering.... wonder why ? ... "Wretched rapture….can they endure apart?".. I'm sure this man will wait for you endlessly

  1. Date: 4/18/2009 12:34:00 AM
    Christie thanks for your welcome comments today on my posting.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 4/17/2009 2:00:00 PM
    Love is the star that shines through anything, and in your poem is fabulous and haunting. Great write, my sister.

  1. Date: 4/16/2009 7:30:00 AM
    Haunting there, she stands atop the tallest peak, rushing the wind, screaming her heart...jumping into petals...I can see it all, and it haunts my core. I know this poem...and it aches, indeed. all my love, C, love, me

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 5:15:00 PM
    Christie,..fabulous words ! I found a silver dime amongst this change ! Thanx for that write. james

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 3:15:00 PM
    Very beautiful words. Separation from one you love can be very hard to endure. But the wonderful memories help. Nice write. Love, Dane

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 2:44:00 PM
    ....Smile~"You" know why? Because "Your Amazing Words, Truly Move Hearts Dear!!!!":):):)~Smile, its just a matter of time, "Beautiful Lady~Before All of Lifes Love~Sweeps 'You' Off 'Your' Feet!!!!":):):)~"My Love Forever To 'You and Your Little Tinkerbell Brianna,' Always, John!!!!"~"Have A Glorious Day Dear Lady!!!!":):):) Bye ~

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 2:36:00 PM
    ....So, as always I am hoping once again, that it is merely "Your Wonderful Gift of Poetic Verse," shining brightly and expressing itself once again within this tearful, hopeful and "Beautiful Sonnet!!!!?":):):)~And if not? Then know this~"Your Future Hangs Brightly Before 'You Beautiful Christie Moses!!!!'":):):)~Smile, and I would not worry too much dear if "You" are!!!!?:):):)....cont....

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 2:27:00 PM
    ....Smile, sorry but I had to step away for a few "Beautiful Christie Moses!!!":):):)~After reading this "Amazingly Profound Soulfelt Write of Yours," for the sixth time~Smile~it does not make me smile on the inside though~because as always has been~"It Is 'Your Priceless Heart' Christie!!!!":):):)~And no-matter how things get spun? I 'Always' hate to see "Your Heart" ever hurt!!!!?:):):)....cont....

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 2:27:00 PM
    Yes! That lonely mountain image has motivated painters and poets forever. The sound is the wind and tears. You are a sweetheart, Christie. Love, daver

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 1:43:00 PM
    Smile~I am starting to believe that they cannot dear "Precious, Talented and Beautiful Christie Moses!!!!":):):)~"I hope that "You and Your Beautiful Daughter Brianna Had A Glorious Easter Day Filled With Lots of Love!!!!":):):) And, that there weren't any Red Rabbits around anywhere~Smile~Ahh, Yesss, "Poetry Soup"....cont....

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 12:28:00 PM
    Knowing they are separated gives me great anxiety. I cannot bear to hear of love unfulfilled, crying out, reaching but never touching. You have broken my heart, so beautifully. Write a happy ending for them. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 11:08:00 AM
    Nearly miss this piece..well done and well written..hope the love will cross seas and make the voice in the poem whole.

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 8:46:00 AM
    The passion echos thruout your words Christie.Rgds Brian & thank you for your kind comments today

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 7:20:00 AM
    So close and yet so far, distance in geography only.

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 7:17:00 AM
    Oh, my god...this takes my breath away, Christie!! This is a poem that demands to be read, because of the passion. My head is spinning....my heart is aching. Just brilliant! Love, Sara

  1. Date: 4/15/2009 7:07:00 AM
    One can hardly stand the thought of them being apart!! I hope he can find her....he must look up...there she is....tell him!!! Wow....so much passion!! ~ Well done, Miss Moses!! ~ love, Carrie