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when we said good-bye

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when we said good-bye

your eyes were a stream
racing through the forest
my heart a drum
playing a solem beat

i lay in the for est 
that tearful day
after our good-byes
to my left, a stream
raceing through the forest
to my right
a drum
playing its solem beat

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