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A Circle of Promises

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A Circle of Promises

Resting upon my outstretched hand
lies what was once
a circle of promises never ending
given as a symbol of love
spoken and unspoken
now just a circle of heartache(s)
this too never ending...
or so it seems.
Two people,
once possessed of this band
vowed for eternity
to travel together as one
a promise soon broken
rendering forever
one again into two.
That which long ago radiated
a warmth felt only
by those it encircled
its luster now dulled by time
lies cold upon my hand
with only my memories 
to hold it there.
I wrap it once more 
within tissue yellowed by time
and return it to my box
of gone but not forgotten memories.

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  1. Date: 2/22/2012 7:56:00 PM
    Love this poem,hits me in the heart.going through a separation with the person who I thought I would live my life with and oh how I miss her,thanks for the write,my love for her will never die.Again thanks and thanks for the comment on my featured poem.

  1. Date: 6/12/2009 9:23:00 AM
    Memories, one thing no one can take, good or bad, well written Melody>James

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 1:08:00 PM
    Whoa!!! I know a lot of people that would love and understand this poem, including myself. I think it's so good because it tells of unending heartache without a trace of anger. Great write! And sooooo TRUE