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light

lover by day,
sleeper by night.

some times I wish,
the sun wasn't so bright.

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  1. Date: 4/21/2009 8:22:00 AM

    Lover by day...... wow. It's so nice to hear a voice with some vision. Mike

  1. Date: 4/17/2009 2:30:00 PM

    Powerful words here. You really express emotion in your words very well but it seems the soul of this writer is confined by a certain sadness. Keep your heart light my friend for you obviously have so much to offer. Well done. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 4/17/2009 1:41:00 AM

    The simplicity of this couplet speaks volumes, great job...Raul

  1. Date: 4/16/2009 10:53:00 AM

    mmm ... here is one to make us think ... below the surface is the soul of your tradition ... on a leaf of suggestion.