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Always Near

Always Near

I'm so confused
you're on my mind
a peaceful moment 
I cannot find.

This you've cast 
upon my heart
has held me tight
it would not part.

I can't stop thinking
I'm so tormented
your charming smile
was so enchanted.

I see you here
I hear you there
I see and hear you
everywhere.

To be with you
is my only wish
and the moment I saw you
I'll forever cherish.

It doesn't matter
wherever you are
from me, I know
you'll never be far.

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  1. Date: 5/8/2009 8:53:00 AM

    This is a very lovely piece... =)- jeremiah

  1. Date: 4/3/2009 3:56:00 PM

    You capture the essence of true love in this beautiful poem, Maryam. Thank you for sharing it with us.

  1. Date: 4/3/2009 3:40:00 PM

    oh how we torture ourselves. jhl

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 3:57:00 AM

    Smile~"So Very Beautiful Maryam!!!:):)~Oh, how I love to see love such as this~especially for someone whom I truly and sincerely admire~"You!!!":):) And, You wrote it with soo much passion and soul~Smile~I am soo happy for You Maryam!!!:):)~"Perfect Write!!!"~"My Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' John!!!"~Bye Dear Lady!!!:):)

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 6:00:00 PM

    Great poem Maryam!! The emotion is clearly brought through. I really like the second to last stanza, I have felt such a feeling before. Amazing job! ~Jen~

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 3:12:00 PM

    This is well written and the emotion is beautifully expressed! The last last vese is endearing. Excelent wor, Maryam! Love Robin