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Innocence Prevails?

I
Got lost
Wandering
Around at night
Fearless of all harm
With innocence I smiled
At a stranger saying hi.
He stopped me by his gaze, I smiled
Then he unzipped his pants, I still smiled
He looked around for eyes, no one was there
Devilishly smiling, he turned to me, I blushed
“Sir, peeing on streets is impolite." He turned away.

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  1. Date: 4/19/2009 12:13:00 AM

    lol. lol. lol.

  1. Date: 4/11/2009 7:09:00 PM

    Good and funny poem. I use reality and imagination in my writings. So I am curious about this poetry. That man must have lost his mind. But you were very respectful and kind enough to re-direct him. We should be merciful to vulnarable people like him. God Bless you.

  1. Date: 4/10/2009 1:21:00 PM

    Very cute!

  1. Date: 4/8/2009 11:36:00 PM

    Congratulations on being featured this week. Great write. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 4/8/2009 7:55:00 PM

    Yara - Once about 25 years ago I thought that i had seen and done all - I reckon I was wrong about that - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj

  1. Date: 4/8/2009 6:24:00 PM

    Wasn't expecting the last line at all ... great writing with a very challenging Form !! Did this really happen to you, Yara? Must have been very startling ... smile ... this is a wonderful write to be a feature this week on the Soup. Congratulations!!

  1. Date: 4/8/2009 7:01:00 AM

    Very thought provoking! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 7:38:00 PM

    Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB, Always Tyesha"

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 1:07:00 PM

    Well, this is most unique! Congrats on your featured write! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 6:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 4:25:00 AM

    Yara, to me this is funy, but I like it. I want to paint that old man peeing. lol. Congratulations. Ernilando

  1. Date: 4/2/2009 1:43:00 PM

    can you write about that over there? john

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 11:31:00 AM

    provoking, and gloomy. some might find it funny, yet I find this hidden darkness in it. loved it, simple and easy, yet easy to understand completely. great write.