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Dwindling Hope

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Dwindling Hope

Hope
Dwindles
Changing course
Of time and space
With glacial winds suffocating my whole
And absence of color within the snow
With the harshness
Of yearning
Dwindles
Hope.

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  1. Date: 4/26/2009 7:26:00 PM
    Hope that dwindles, it is common in the heart of the hurt. Love the style. Love, Sami.

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 12:15:00 AM
    this is reall impressive, yara. another great techincal poem

  1. Date: 4/17/2009 5:43:00 PM
    Wow. Excellent write. A serious feeling of hopelessness. You did wonders with this form. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 5:30:00 AM
    '...absence of color within the snow' so aptly describes the condition of hopelessness and the starkness it brings. Well done Yara! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 5:10:00 AM
    I look at the world often times and see what you feel, but I rage to keep my being separate from it. This write reminds me that we poets are everyman, and everything is us. Our words are pictures changed to feelings, and represent the acme of the truth we are. Love and blessings, good write.