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Absence

Her heart lingers far
Beset by constant turmoil 
Keeping its distance 
From other heartbeats and souls
It withers away, it dies. 

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  1. Date: 4/24/2009 4:47:00 PM

    Beautiful soothing flow of words. Your reader needs more tanka poem. Wishing you all the best.

  1. Date: 4/20/2009 3:08:00 AM

    Lovely Yara nice one and thanks for commenting on my poem

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 6:50:00 PM

    The heart is precautions, choosing which society to live in. Keeping its distance from emotions and feelings. But when a heart experiences no love, it withers away and dies. Lovely tanka. Enjoyed it very much.