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The Break Of Dawn

I don't sleep too well these days,
I have seen so many suns
arise, hoping for worries
to take the back seat
and demise.

The break of dawn
holds such beauty,
for that precious moment,
I'm not alone,
just a chid again,
and Gods wonder,
my home.

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  1. Date: 5/17/2009 7:28:00 PM

    I know some days I feel like this. I can certainly relate.

  1. Date: 5/15/2009 10:38:00 AM

    beautiful <3 Jessica

  1. Date: 5/13/2009 7:17:00 AM

    Ann,....how did I miss commenting on this poem! Blah ! This is unique,...like ,..how do you catch a unique bunny rabbit ?,...you 'nque up on it! *smiles*,..truly,..this is a fine poem....TY james

  1. Date: 5/8/2009 11:23:00 AM

    There are towm mindset going on this piece as I read it..the first stanza shows hopelessness, while the last stanza gives some hope...this is a piece that makes me think..thanks for the comments on my poem this morning.

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 7:50:00 PM

    Smile~"Hello Precious, Blessed & Beautiful Ann Anderson!":)~I sincerely hope that Your life is treating You extremely wonderfully dear lady!:)~I love the comfort of reassurance that I see within this write!:)~For it makes my heart very happy, to know and believe that "Your Priceless Heart" has found such a state!:)~Smile~So don't 'ever' let go of this truth dear lady!:)~And, always know, "That I Send 'You & Your Loves' My Love Forever, Always, John!:)

  1. Date: 3/29/2009 9:11:00 AM

    Love the way you describe, "I have seen so man suns arise, hoping for worries to take the back seat." Beautiful image of hope!