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Always the Same

Corrosive -- scorching heat clogs
Drips of sweat race between each hair
Sliding down, such warmth fogs
Corrosive sadistic heat, awaken I.

Transition -- every day brightens all
Serenading down to the nightfall
Temptation flames within, urges – desires
Transition where? Every day and every night

Hesitation -- explore bold punctuation
Nervous as it can be, such brittle bones – pathetic
Hereby the island of sweet sedation
I lie with no transition, with no urges

Inspiration.
Inspire a young fool to grow.

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  1. Date: 9/18/2009 6:45:00 PM

    inspiration,,yes qiute an inspiration in your writes--excellent verses.. i cant see a fool in this write just talent and beautiful poetry--Charma:)

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 8:42:00 AM

    Wow, you really have a gift for expression. I love the profound searching I read in this. Amazing poetry. Love Christie

  1. Date: 3/27/2009 5:16:00 AM

    This is indeed thought provoking. I do sense a bit of frustration, as by your title, too. You are no fool, I am sure. Everything is timing and your journey is no doubt young. Good luck! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/27/2009 1:41:00 AM

    Hello Sam~what a seeminly very profound reflection amid possibly an introspection? I have read it twice; and I am quite certain that if I read it many times more, I would find something even more revealing from within the writers depthful muse....as it stands now; it seems if the writer, is some enhulfed amid certains and tet seperated from their doings? Very interesting indeed! Excellent write nt friend! Much love and warmth to you, john!:)