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  1. Date: 6/23/2009 2:53:00 PM
    Wow!!! Amazing piece.

  1. Date: 4/25/2009 11:03:00 PM
    Wow... Breathtaking! This is a powerful write. Your words are so full of passion. Amazing the way we find ourself hidden so deep within the words that flow from our own souls though they come from somewhere beyond ourselves. A masterpiece of wisdom and dreams, kissed by Spirit. Great writing my friend. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 3/27/2009 6:56:00 AM
    love the twist! love dream poetry! Jim

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 11:02:00 PM
    Patrick, this poem is great. It is richly enshrouded with myth, mystery and meaning, and will outlast you and I. God bless you

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 10:28:00 PM
    truly I've been taught by some greats, their wisdom profound.. and if what you are lacking so to speak in this write, (my perception) is but within your core. And once we realize how insignificant our presence is upon this earth, it is then we truly give to people and the earth :) Wonderful, wonderful write! so thought provoking, best regards, Lucinda

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 10:07:00 PM
    This is .....Brilliant! Great flow and interesting approach to a captivating theme: dreams. This piece makes me remember Jorge Luis Borges. And it is going to my fav. Thanks for sharing it. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 9:17:00 PM
    All you could not be remaining you makes me want to bring in theology or metaphysics, and good poetry always point to something greater than itself. Marvellous! peace and love