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What Dreams May Come

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What Dreams May Come

I dreamt
A dream
That dreamt
A me

That slept to wake
To clutch the sea

To grasp the moon
To beg the trees

To ruffle grass
And kiss the leaves

The dreaming
Dream
Dreamt of me

Dreamt of air
I couldn't breath

Dreamt of all I couldn't be

With I's enshrouded
Eye could see

The dream was me

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  1. Date: 6/23/2009 2:53:00 PM

    Wow!!! Amazing piece.

  1. Date: 4/25/2009 11:03:00 PM

    Wow... Breathtaking! This is a powerful write. Your words are so full of passion. Amazing the way we find ourself hidden so deep within the words that flow from our own souls though they come from somewhere beyond ourselves. A masterpiece of wisdom and dreams, kissed by Spirit. Great writing my friend. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 3/27/2009 6:56:00 AM

    love the twist! love dream poetry! Jim

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 11:02:00 PM

    Patrick, this poem is great. It is richly enshrouded with myth, mystery and meaning, and will outlast you and I. God bless you

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 10:07:00 PM

    This is .....Brilliant! Great flow and interesting approach to a captivating theme: dreams. This piece makes me remember Jorge Luis Borges. And it is going to my fav. Thanks for sharing it. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 9:17:00 PM

    All you could not be remaining you makes me want to bring in theology or metaphysics, and good poetry always point to something greater than itself. Marvellous! peace and love