Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

I'm undone without someone

chandru ganesh S Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled I'm undone without someone which was written by poet chandru ganesh S. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by chandru ganesh S

Best Chandru Ganesh S Poems

+ Fav Poet

I'm undone without someone

Quite like a moon, will you gloom in to my doom?
Soon and ever I shall stay like a soothing plume
Shine in your smile, can reclaim my life in no time
Unto belling then, I’m undone without someone.

O' touching the leaves, you did loom it to flowers
When you chant, I’m possible is how impossible sounds
Everything changes for you, why dn't you begin a change?
Living with your seizing mirage, do I sound so strange?

Letting me hollow, you stroll into me solo. 
Beginning a walk, you stood in my heart. Bravo!
Indifferently you may render, still I would stay nearer
Unto globe finds nowhere, merely for you, I’m there.

Quite like a moon, will you gloom in to my doom?
Soon and ever I shall stay like a soothing plume
Shine in your smile, will reclaim my life in no time
Unto belling then, I’m undone without someone.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 5/6/2009 6:36:00 AM
    Well written and thanks for your comment on "Hey Old Man." The moral is not to judge others as you never know what they've been through. The last lines were meant to show the boy gained an understanding and had teardrops in his eyes as he walked away. The story was baed on an incident between a juvenile delinquent I was working with and a homeless person. If the poem was meant to be mean, it would have been about a politician or a lawyer. God Bless. Vince

  1. Date: 4/8/2009 10:40:00 AM
    ... gloom to doom, this reads like some ancient mysticism about the moon ... powerful image. An intriguing poem ... excellent!

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 12:59:00 AM
    nice very nice ..... josh