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Mr. Cloud

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Mr. Cloud

Daddy, what is that?
Why’s he floating all alone?
Goodbye Mr. Cloud.

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  1. Date: 3/29/2009 10:13:00 AM
    Mr. Cloud, nice title, your attention is vast and captures it all, amazing material.

  1. Date: 3/28/2009 11:48:00 PM
    I've heard such questions.

  1. Date: 3/28/2009 11:34:00 PM
    Your imagination is infinite, Raul. The title"Mr. Cloud" :kills me. Brilliant. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/27/2009 10:07:00 PM
    Awe....sweet write, childish questions. Love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 3/27/2009 3:15:00 AM
    Nice title. I can see a child asking this. Strong images you paint in your work. DN

  1. Date: 3/27/2009 2:58:00 AM
    Nice one again, this one showcases a child so well. Great observing eye you have. Tyler

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 1:20:00 PM
    this is sooo sweet and innocent.....it made me smile~...Maryam*

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 5:55:00 AM
    Ahh, to be a child again. Precious the way their innocent, imaginative minds work. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 12:01:00 AM
    delicately simple, and beautiful. brilliant write friend

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 9:32:00 PM
    THE QUESTIONS OF BABES THEY ARE SO INNOCENT .... GREAT JOB RAUL