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Hostess twinkies

.     The yellow cream filled twinkie
               A frozen delight,
        Try eating it nice and cold;
             Tongue enveloping
               Tonsil tackling
                Throat filling
                    Cream!





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{throw them in the freezer before you eat them}


inspired by:

sweet treat contest (Laura Mckenzie)

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  1. Date: 9/14/2009 12:42:00 PM

    Yummy, yummy Abe>>James

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 5:50:00 PM

    Sounds Devilishly yummy, I love twinkies but never had em frozen, might have to give it a try..Great Epulaeryu...GB Always, Tyesha

  1. Date: 4/2/2009 5:37:00 PM

    Okay I hate twinkies but I can already tell Im going to buy a stupid box of them. Hey have you ever tried one deep fried? Seriously can't believe frozen sponge cake is going to be good.

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 6:09:00 PM

    YUMMY WRITE ABE, GOOD LUCK................DM

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 3:59:00 PM

    yummy,i just need to try it out,sounds delicious

  1. Date: 3/29/2009 9:59:00 AM

    Mouth watering lines. Nice job and good luck.

  1. Date: 3/28/2009 11:33:00 PM

    I like the method, I'm going to have to try this. Great job.

  1. Date: 3/27/2009 12:11:00 PM

    I LOVE EATING TWINKIES TOO,NICE WRITE

  1. Date: 3/27/2009 2:55:00 AM

    Twinkies are the bomb, you wrote a great poem. I hope you win something. Tyler

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 1:50:00 PM

    Thanks for you comment on my Pisces write. Encouragement is always appreciated. I have entered it into the contest as you suggested. I also entered the food Epulaeryu contest. I must admit, I'm a little jealous of yours....It made me want twinkies right now!!! Great job!

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 9:34:00 AM

    los of fun, Abe! good job! thanks for comments, Jim

  1. Date: 3/26/2009 5:12:00 AM

    I'm going to try it! It sound tempting. Good job, Abe. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 9:01:00 PM

    Yummy, Abe!

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 4:22:00 PM

    Lol.....you have me wanting to eat one haha....great job and good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 4:11:00 PM

    The twinkies have it brother and so does this piece.. best wishes in the contest.

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 3:27:00 PM

    Gotta love the Twinkies...lol. Great write!

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 2:14:00 PM

    Nice equlaeryu, you must like twinkies. I don't really care for them, but there is a lot of people I know that does like them. Good job keep it up. Love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 11:39:00 AM

    Great "taste"

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 11:23:00 AM

    Mmm...delicious write Abe...Raul

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 11:10:00 AM

    great write Mr. L!!! Im craving twinkies!!!

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 11:09:00 AM

    WONDERFUL MR.LOPEZ!!!!!!!!!!!i love that one like always.thats funny.

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 9:53:00 AM

    excellent writing, love the ' Tongue enveloping' ... ~ Arany

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 8:28:00 AM

    I love the tonsil tackling line....that one especially...is a winning piece of poetry! ~ loved it! ~Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 7:41:00 AM

    Best of luck, Abe, this deserves to be winner, I could not do a better job ... except in eating it. Love

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 7:27:00 AM

    MMMMM.... Makes me really hungry !!

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 7:07:00 AM

    YUMMY! Sounds pretty good. *^_^* Good luck on the contest. Love Christie