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Places of Wait

the grass is green, the sky is blue
the sun waits, for the moon
and here i live for thee,
trusting, wondering, hoping, please, 
come to me...

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  1. Date: 8/2/2009 3:32:00 AM

    Delighful poem Faire>>James

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 7:36:00 PM

    Dear Faire, This is like a mini Prayer I like it the flow is Great Imagery clear SUPERB when YOU don't know what Form of POETRY it is YOU can always use Free Verse ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 6:08:00 AM

    They wait upon the Lord shall renew their strenght ... (to wait for all earthly things). A quiet little poem with a beautiful melody. Thanks and welcome here. One love

  1. Date: 3/22/2009 12:37:00 AM

    exellent poem