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Below is the poem entitled Indigo which was written by poet Alyssa Finley. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Indigo

Alizarin azaleas
in the myrtle moss
where my flax feet cross
to the saffron sand,
in my magenta mind...
Beneath a cerulean sky
where the fuchsia fowl fly
to a haematic horizon
for true lavender love, 
with my turquoise thoughts...
Ascending a viridian vortex
was my amaranth amour
with its vermilion vim
to your henna hands,
from my hazel heart...
Such silver sincerity
fades to xanadu xenon
as your damson dissent
shoves the taupe truth,
down my thistle throat...
Umber unanimity 
in my wisteria world
has turned my crimson comfort so,
indigo.

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  1. Date: 10/2/2009 11:49:00 AM
    Alyssa, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 4:24:00 PM
    Just dropping to add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 10:24:00 AM
    Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 4:02:00 AM
    Simply beautiful! dear Alyssa. Best wishes through to the next round. Love, Elaine

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 10:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Alyssa. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/5/2009 8:01:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James

  1. Date: 9/3/2009 9:10:00 PM
    Incredible palette here, Alyssa !! One little typo as in TAUPE TRUTH (the au is ua ...) has me playing school teacher but perfection is a good thing ... and taupe is a great color as are all the rainbow you've given .. smile ... This is going on my favorite list for sure!! A well-deserved selection to be featured this week at the Soup!! Congratulations!!

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 10:32:00 AM
    Great use of alliteration, Alyssa! Congratulations on being featured this week! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 4:09:00 AM
    Congratulations, Alyssa, on having your well-written poem featured this week. Your words entice the mind on a journey of thought through the colors of your mind. Excellent. Keep writing. Lovingly, DAS-J

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 3:04:00 AM
    Congratulations on being featured this week. A. W.

  1. Date: 9/1/2009 12:16:00 AM
    Alyssa, congratulations on your feature this week...Raul

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 5:12:00 PM
    Nice use of rhyme and alliteration for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 8:00:00 AM
    This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great Alyssa! Adeleke

  1. Date: 8/31/2009 4:13:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Alyssa. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/8/2009 11:50:00 AM
    Colorful and twisting with energy! I don't even know how you managed to find alliterations for the "X" words! Passionate yet playful, you've crafted a skillful expression in vivid detail. Warm regards, John.

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 4:36:00 AM
    ...."Umber unanimity in my wisteria world has turned my crimson comfort so, indigo"~Smile, awesome and so very tender at the same time!!!:):)~I have told You this before Alyssa Finley~"You Are A Prodigy Dear!!!:):)~I can feel it in my soul!!!:):)~"Absolutely Beautiful Write!!!":):)~Lets go view Your other write dear~"Love To You & Yours, Always, John!!!:):)

  1. Date: 4/7/2009 4:28:00 AM
    Smile~This wonderful write is soo perfectly beautiful!!!:):)~"You Are Such An Astonishing Writer Alyssa Finley!!!:):)~I am sincerely sorry that I did not get to You or this splendid write sooner~but I have been away for a few on vacations moments!!!:):)~Smile, yet, I am soo highly impressed with this "Perfectly Amazing Write Here Dear Young Lady!!!:):)....cont....

  1. Date: 3/27/2009 2:02:00 AM
    Smile~I absolutely adore this write so very very much!:) I remember when I read it this wonderful write the other day-how truly amazing that I believed that it was! And that how within my own personal opinion; perhaps the very best that I have 'ever' read of your gifted writes Alyssa Finley! Completely perfect I would say! One of the very best writes I have ever read actually! You are soo amazing-a prodigy I believe! Love & Warth To You & All, John!:)

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 7:00:00 AM
    magical original poetry! please, please, if this poem could go on forever, oh mygoshhh! I've never read anything quite so beautiful! this poem is the reason to quit your day job & just read online! ; ) Jim

  1. Date: 3/20/2009 1:38:00 AM
    wow , I wish I new the words to say about your work with out being overly dramantic,,, outstanding work , Johnathon

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