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War should be over!

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War should be over!

Pardon,
       Oh, yeah...
              No, thanks...
       Are you crying?
bang...bang...bang
LOL.


       

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  1. Date: 3/19/2009 5:16:00 PM

    ok? how is this a haiku? I'm just trying to learn. Light & Love email me

  1. Date: 3/18/2009 10:46:00 AM

    Wonderful title here, Tavip!! The form is more Free Verse than Haiku. A Haiku is 3 lines of Line 1=5 syllables, Line 2=7 syllables, Line 3=5 syllables and is usually written about nature. There are examples in the left column on your screen under "Resources". PoetrySoup is a great place to learn so many different forms and can be a lot of fun!! I look forward to reading much more from you!!