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Rebuild Anew

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Rebuild Anew

“Rebuild anew”, he said to me,
the one of stillness ‘neath the sea.
“Rise to the shore; as one we’ll stand.
These hardened castles made of sand 
protect your darkest memory.”

The lone wolf blows with certainty.
He shatters hollow masonry.
Destruction steadied by still hand.
Rebuild anew.

I only want tranquility, 
to end these tortures mindlessly.
My heart be still, my life be grand.
Upon the rock I claim this land
to reinvent my destiny.
Rebuild anew.

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  1. Date: 3/10/2010 2:27:00 PM

    wow yeah i agree with the others this poem i thought, was brilliantly wordedi love your writing and i always come to read you first and am never dissapointed, would love to know what you think of mine thatnks, Jo

  1. Date: 2/21/2010 10:39:00 AM

    enjoyed that

  1. Date: 12/27/2009 10:09:00 PM

    Looking thru past wiinners to see what they like here. This makes me feel good. They chose a rondeau!! I can do rondeau!! You did a great one. Congrats! andrea

  1. Date: 10/20/2009 6:59:00 AM

    Amen Yoni! A very brilliant job indeed,the product of a loving seed.You no doubt deserved that place,for running such a close run race.Keep scoring,God Bless, PRINCE

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 2:04:00 PM

    oh to live in peace in Zion. when Jacobs trouble has ended, then build. jhl

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 4:51:00 AM

    Congratulations, Yoni, on your 2nd place win in the June 2009 Poetry Soup Contest. Your beautiful poem is most definitely a winner as are you with your poetic skills. I am very happy for you. May "The one of stillness by the sea" continue to bless you with excellent words and wisdom. Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 2:29:00 AM

    Dear Yoni, Congratulations on this masterpiece winning second place. Lainie

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 12:24:00 PM

    Yoni, congratulations on your second place finish in the Poetry Soup contest! What an accomplishment! Enjoy your wonderful honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 10:33:00 AM

    What a wonderful birthday present, Yoni !! Congratulations on your 2nd place finish in the PoetrySoup Contest for June '09. Keep up the great writing !!

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 10:12:00 AM

    beautiful as always Yoni =) congrats on your 2nd place win xo Raiin

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 5:36:00 PM

    Wonderful script. FELICITATIONS for your win on PS contest.

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 2:43:00 PM

    Congrats for this!!! Epic last stanza @.@ windy jojojo thanks for the experience =D

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 1:56:00 PM

    congrats on the win, great poem here!!

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 11:10:00 AM

    Wow, very nice indeed! Great write! Congrats on winning 2nd place, well deserved. LOL Caryl

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 11:10:00 AM

    Many congrats on you second place Yoni, well done >> James

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 6:25:00 AM

    Wowser 2nd place BOYO!!! Huzzah!!! Hip hip hurray...you beat me out too you little dickens! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 3:50:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the June,2009 contest sponsored by PoetrySoup Yoni. Love,Carol

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 9:58:00 PM

    ><>~ Congratulations on your 2nd place poem, Yoni. Great work and well deserved. ~<><

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 7:41:00 PM

    Beautiful poetic write. Congratulations on 2nd place. Truly a wonderful poem.

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 7:19:00 PM

    Congratulations on your #2 win!! Outstanding, I'm so happy for you! Love Light Truth Patricia

  1. Date: 10/13/2009 6:58:00 PM

    Hooray, 2nd place win!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great work, and how wonderful to be acknowledged as a great poet that you are!!! Congratulations! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 8:01:00 PM

    Yoni, kudos on this selected poem going through the finals! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 12:08:00 PM

    Best of luck with both entries...Raul

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 12:07:00 PM

    Yoni, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 3:13:00 PM

    Just dropping by to add---Congratulations on having two poems make it through the first round in the contest. It is a tribute to your talent. Good luck in the finals! Karen

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 3:38:00 PM

    Congratulations on these two winning poems....good luck in the next round!! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 12:25:00 PM

    I'm so glad this one made it through round one, Yoni! Great work! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 11:59:00 AM

    Yoni, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition, good luck >> James

  1. Date: 9/5/2009 7:59:00 AM

    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, Yoni>>James

  1. Date: 9/3/2009 8:54:00 PM

    There is an awesome cadence to this beautiful writing, Yoni. So glad it has been selected to be featured this week at the Soup! Congratulations !!

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