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Tell Me

Tell me you don't need me and I will prove you wrong.

You say I'm complicated maybe I will write a song.

Look me in the eyes and tell me that I'm ugly and I will let you look at what is true beauty.

Tell me you have faith in me, and i will show you what i can be.

I know you will  believe, on life and everything in your heart. 

Tell me you will always be there for me, when I AM in the dark.

Tell me that i will be your friend,
One day we will go on a journey and walk to the end.




You've told me I've saved you from yourself and giving up

I have saved you from whats concealed in your heart

You've said that I have saved you from yourself, 

You've told me you loved, and that you would be faithful until the end

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  1. Date: 3/26/2009 3:51:00 AM

    Nicely rhymed. Too much of "Tell me"s sounds little bad, Well tried. You have the potential to improve far.