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Naive

(This is a letter to myself, my much younger self)


How can you proclaim
of something that has been
unlicked, 
anonymous,
to your very heart?
To be relevant is your bliss
when you are anything but
the match of his coexistence,
anything but common-
You spill over
from a single drop
of misconstrued
charm,
after you catch a glance
from the one
you ever so,
"love"
When those three words
never exhaled from his
mouth,
Never entered his
mind.

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  1. Date: 3/18/2009 5:53:00 PM

    Such a great point to make...we can feel ten feet tall in our minds, naivety pumping up our chest. But that one humbling heartbreak makes us feel so much more mortally vulnerable. Nice job darlin! Much love, Steve

  1. Date: 3/16/2009 1:35:00 PM

    I love the ending, it kicks you in the gut forcing you to read it again. -Jason

  1. Date: 3/14/2009 6:02:00 PM

    Wow! wow! great timing of words, razor smoothly sweet

  1. Date: 3/14/2009 7:38:00 AM

    This is beautifully written straight from your soul. It is so hard sometimes to address ourselves you do it so well and make it seem so easy. "A single drop of misconstrued charm" wow. Nice writing. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 3/14/2009 4:09:00 AM

    This is a beautiful write..love the first two lines.. they say so much.. confusion...assumptions..love the sweet flow to this piece..wonderful ending.

  1. Date: 3/14/2009 2:21:00 AM

    Smile~What a wonderfully honest, reflecting and soul searching write here dear young lady!!~"Hello Talented & Precious Alyssa Finley!!!"~"How can you claim something that has been unlicked anoymous to your very heart?"~Smile~ Your wonderful writings are so beyond Your years dear! Somewhat amazing actually! You are going to be such a great writer someday!! And, this, was absolutely outstanding Alyssa!!!~" Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves, John!!:):)