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Young Bush Rush... flush

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  1. Date: 8/3/2013 1:10:00 AM
    P.S. -- And a belated congratulations on this poem being featured during October of 2012(Ha ha!).

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 1:08:00 AM
    I am still trying to rhyme "Bush" with "flush" .... it's taking me a while. Maybe one day I will understand it. Or is the rhyme only meant to be an internal one in the 2nd line?(rush and flush). Oh, is this a slant-rhyme footle? I know you still lurk around. I am looking through my poems to see which ones I should delete, etc, and I noticed a decent critique that you left on one of the poems I was looking at. You weren't afraid to do so. That's cool man. R(h)ubarb, I hope you are doing well.

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 5:48:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Ruben. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 7:32:00 PM
    Congratulations on your featured poem, Ruben. Hope you are well. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 10:52:00 AM
    the best thing here is the fantastic title, Ruben. Doble-U. That's wonderful!! And think how we say W in English. It's Double U!!! looks more like double V. VV for W!!!

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 1:49:00 AM
    Nice one Ruben.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 7:29:00 AM
    Oh, I think he was flushed, Ruben! He had behaved in a somewhat turdy manner?:( Short and to the point...like a pencil.:) I don't thinkthere's an eraser, but there's no end to the supply of fresh pages. Best to you...God bless you and yours...Mikki

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 6:12:00 PM
    nice rhyming-charma

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 4:55:00 AM
    Very interesting piece. Thanks for commenting on my work also.

  1. Date: 3/27/2009 1:48:00 PM
    Dear Ruben, Nice Footle I think everyone got bit by Brian's April Footle bug By the number of Footles YOU wrote I think YOU got bit twice Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on my personally experienced POEM"Broken Heart" ALWAYS...HG

  1. Date: 3/27/2009 6:45:00 AM
    Wow! four words - so expressive. How do you do that? Thanks for commenting on glasses poem. Glad I made you laugh. We all need that these days.

  1. Date: 3/25/2009 8:46:00 PM
    nice footle. I enjoy the rhyme in this work!

  1. Date: 3/24/2009 2:47:00 PM
    Simple and cute ^^

  1. Date: 3/24/2009 5:05:00 AM
    Nice footle...you are good at these. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 3/18/2009 8:50:00 PM
    Hi Ruben, in the absence of any clear direction on how to interpret this poem, I decided to invent my own interpretation, at least of the 4 words since I have no idea whatsoever to make of the dots:) This is actually a scene from the movie "W" by Oliver Stone where Gdub's getting drunk at his frat party rush initiation. Lush - he's an alcoholic, Bush - he's rich and powerful no matter how dumb he is, Rush - hazing the newbies, Flush- his face after they pour beer down his throat:)

  1. Date: 3/16/2009 10:22:00 AM
    I love the way you read my poems. I am new to poetry soup, and you are very encouraging. Your poem is so short, they force to unload your meanings from metaphors, analogy, synonyms that stretches forever. God bless you

  1. Date: 3/16/2009 6:39:00 AM
    Dangerous. I love the Barack on too. The well trained weapon of deft soldiery echoes. Thanks for the oneness and embrace, Peace and love.

  1. Date: 3/11/2009 9:11:00 AM
    Great footle, Ruben. Love the way ALL the words rhyme. Nice work! Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 12:01:00 PM
    Laurie's comment is cracking me up once again! She is right though, I believe they are addictive! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 3/10/2009 5:39:00 AM
    in words we share... so do you

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